Essay #2: Digital Divide vs. Participation Gap, and how they will both affect my future classroom.

I reviewed the writing of Cassandra Wido.

Cassandra's writing

Strong points of Cassandra's writing #2 are...Great use of quotes, they really fit into what she was talking about at the time. Good reference page. Excellent description of digital divide and participation-and the examples that went along with them. Also-good reflection, very personal!

Things that could be improved are...Not many, just a couple run-on sentences in the beginning. But other than that, no gramatical errors or anything that needs to be added to make the essay complete. She did a great job! :)

Quality of their work (*, or **, or ***)

Cassandra: ***