Peer Review of Shawn Travis

Content Target: Shawn answered all the questions, and the essay flowed very well. He incorporated the standards in his essay which was extremely important. He correctly sited his sources, and used the correct format for his works cited.

I think Shawn deserves a 4 out of 4 on his paper because it reflected how knowledgeable he was of the topics he described throughout the essay. I like when he described what words meant with clear vivid examples. I think Shawn should of gone in more detail about some topics, and I think he should of added the hyperlink to the websites so you can click them, and go to the site. Shawn met all the requirements for NETS Essay # 1, and I enjoyed reading his work!

by Heidi Bennett