Essay #1: Why it is important for teachers to demonstrate competency with the National Educational Technology Standards.

I reviewed the writing of Cassandra Wido.

Cassandra's writing

Strong points of Cassandra's writing #1 are... I thought it was important that she defined competency. For each point she made, she backed up her reasoning with valid facts, and strong opinions.

Things that could be improved are...Overall, her writing was excellent, easy to follow but there were a few grammatical errors that need to be fixed.

Overall...Great Job!!!

Quality of their work (*, or **, or ***)

Cassandra: ***